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hydrate - to supply water by ~firebird1423:iconfirebird1423:



Dryed up.
Hung out.
Boiling on the side walk...
Scrap me off,
    pick me up,
    drown me.
Hydration will only make me stronger.
Lay down beside me and you will keep me alive,
    quenching my desert.
Reduce my horrid stretching to keep me sane.
Let our touch be quiet and thirstless.
Keep my soul nurtured,
    grow me tender.
©2008-2009 ~firebird1423
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one day i was hot and then i wrote

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:iconbilbobuxton:
is it quenching??
and really good (Y)
impressive stuff

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those of you who cannot look to what is before you
are so obsessed with your mistakes that
you cannot face decisions to be made,
and that will be your downfall
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:iconfirebird1423:
yes it is thanks for pointing out.... thanks this one is probably my favorite out of all of the shit that i write
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:iconbilbobuxton:
i wuldnt really call it shit, i actually thought it was rather good, so dont put yourself down as much

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those of you who cannot look to what is before you
are so obsessed with your mistakes that
you cannot face decisions to be made,
and that will be your downfall
:iconfirebird1423:
i wasnt hehe just who i am but thanks for you concern i appreciate it... (but tis kinda shitty right now cause i cant find anything i want to write about... stupid brainfarts and no storms!) hehe
:iconbilbobuxton:
teehee, just write about the view from your window or something, thats the kind of thing i do

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those of you who cannot look to what is before you
are so obsessed with your mistakes that
you cannot face decisions to be made,
and that will be your downfall

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